Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

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Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby FishieLips » Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:16 pm

Here's a link to my attempts, but I'm not completely satisfied with any of these.
Any advice or impressions would be appreciated!

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Hey all! To ease all curiosity this penis does have a tongue, he has a whole body too ;) And soon you'll get to see it if you follow my page or keep an eye out for the tags (MouthCock, LipDick, PenisMaw) . I just wanted to make sure the outside aesthetic of my mouth penis was okay. Any advise? Opinions? I may add the characteristics this lovely penis belongs to isn't all mine (I'm helping HoneyBooBun with character design).
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby CrimsonFangX666 » Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:30 pm

Hm... I can't really think of one at the moment. It looks good otherwise. Coming from a guy who identifies as straight so I don't look at penises that often, that's a pretty well done dick.
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby FishieLips » Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:02 pm

CrimsonFangX666 wrote:Hm... I can't really think of one at the moment. It looks good otherwise. Coming from a guy who identifies as straight so I don't look at penises that often, that's a pretty well done dick.

Thanks!
Something feels off to me aesthetically... It feels more it's loosened than lips...
If I can't figure out something better, this is passable?
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby CrimsonFangX666 » Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:30 pm

FishieLips wrote:
CrimsonFangX666 wrote:Hm... I can't really think of one at the moment. It looks good otherwise. Coming from a guy who identifies as straight so I don't look at penises that often, that's a pretty well done dick.

Thanks!
Something feels off to me aesthetically... It feels more it's loosened than lips...
If I can't figure out something better, this is passable?


Passable to me. I'm not an authority on them, however. I'd ask someone like Nitro Titan. He's good at penis maws.
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby AshLovehart » Mon Apr 16, 2018 12:07 am

Id honestly love to see this, but with a tongue as well! :O
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby FishieLips » Mon Apr 16, 2018 1:45 am

CrimsonFangX666 wrote:.

OMIGAWSH
I'm way too shy I could never.
,,OAO,,
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby FishieLips » Mon Apr 16, 2018 1:47 am

AshLovehart wrote:Id honestly love to see this, but with a tongue as well! :O

I'm right there with you!
I just wanna figure out the mouth part. I want it to definitely look like a mouth instead of loose foreskin or something.
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby Collier » Mon Apr 16, 2018 3:46 am

So, here are my thoughts:

To give a bit of background, although I'm straight as an arrow, I always LOVE CV, regardless of if its between two males, a male and a female, a herm and a male or female, etc. Why I love it so much is beyond me, but any time I see it, I can't look away! When I saw the title of this discussion, I was confused as to what exactly you meant. However, when I clicked on it and looked at the picture provided, I'm totally for this idea! I don't know anybody who has done something like this before, and I would lover to see how it turns out! :D
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby windsweptcave » Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:33 am

Your sense of form is excellent, but I can see why you feel something is missing. I'm seconding the tongue idea. I think it would help add some personality.
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Re: Trying to draw a mouthcock for CV. Critique?

Postby gr8fzy1 » Fri Apr 27, 2018 11:19 am

Just my thoughts here, but although I like the design my only complaint is that the penis doesn't appear to have any visible head. It's just lips on the end of a shaft. And the lips themselves look less like lips and more like just a puffy hole. I understand that it's because of the cramped space and the lips being so...voluptuous. I have seen other lippy cocks, and they have lips that are clearly two parts, an upper and lower lip. these look like four part, less like a mouth and more like a worm maw.

I wish you the best of luck, my own peen has a mouth too. <3
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